From d522566283d175a862c0d590562463d79ea1cf9c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: l-kutch <55860089+l-kutch@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Oct 2019 08:47:59 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Revised mostly for style (#104)

- heading followed by intro sentence
- present tense
- command follows the reference item
- bullets only for multiple items, though if more limitations are found, then I would put the bullet back
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 docs/performance.md | 17 ++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/performance.md b/docs/performance.md
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@@ -1,27 +1,26 @@
 # Performance
+Performance testing against our lab configuration produces the following results and limitations. 
 
 ## Tested Configuration
 
-* SC4S instance requesting 8 cores and 4 GB of memory with K8S scheduler. 
+* SC4S instance requesting 8 cores and 4 GB of memory with K8S scheduler 
 * 6 Splunk Indexers clustered in Single site
-* 1 loggen test client using the following command 
+* 1 loggen test client using the following command:
+    ```
+    /opt/syslog-ng/bin/loggen -i --rate=1000 --interval=180 -P -F --sdata="[test name=\"stress17\"]" -s 800 --active-connections=10 sc4s 514`
+    ```
 * AWS instance type c5n.4xlarge
 
-```bash
-/opt/syslog-ng/bin/loggen -i --rate=1000 --interval=180 -P -F --sdata="[test name=\"stress17\"]" -s 800 --active-connections=10 sc4s 514
-```
-
 ## Result  
 
-The single syslog-ng container in this test is able to provided effective balancing and routing of events equivalent 632 GB per day 
+The single syslog-ng container in this test is able to provide effective balancing and routing of events equivalent to 632 GB per day:
 
 ```
 average rate = 9717.58 msg/sec, count=1749420, time=180.026, (average) msg size=800, bandwidth=7591.86 kB/sec
-
 ```
 
 
 ## Limitations
 
-* Splunk Enterprise's implementation of the http event collection server will respond to the client with a status code 200 and fail to commit the events to disk during a rolling restart in our testing 20-30 events per indexer may be lost
+Splunk Enterprise's implementation of the http event collection server responds to the client with a status code 200 and fails to commit the events to disk during a rolling restart. In our testing, 20-30 events per indexer are lost.